Nice, I really like paranormal content and paranormal investigation, used to really like X-files back in the day. Nice little snapshot of life in this world for the priest and the church responding to demonic activity and having to figure out the exact nature of the incident.
You did a lot with such a short story, well done.
JAMRIOT
Great work! I love how you began the "NIGHT OF THE INCIDENT" report especially. You did a great job setting the scene and making the document work for your story. I particularly appreciate the way you're able to create dialogue with the demon, avoiding the temptation of making a being like him be overly-edgy or nonsensically evil.
This is another intriguing story that I'm impressed you were able to go into such depth with in spite of the time and word limits imposed by the Writer's Jam, and I'd love to see you continue this story in more depth in the future! Thanks for your participation!
FatherBeef
Thank you for your feed back! I actually plan on expanding the world that's established in this short story later on, so im glad you take an interest!